Tweaked Chararts Approval/Archive 1

Blackfur ~ Tweaked[]

Hm. What differances are there in Oceanfeathers charart than in yours? Why do you think this change is important? otherwise, I like it. Oceanfeathers was skilled but your charart fits the description more. Tweak approved._{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining}

I personally thought the smudging on Ocean's was out of the lines.

Dapple heart ♥ 02:24, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

The only reason it fits is because it was changed. It use to be "A black tom with brown patches of fur" Cinderstorm made the page and thats what it was. I like this one better.. kind of.. because I couldn't get the right brown for his patches and they were a little smudged. I just had to make that clear(:

O c e a n f e a t h e r 01:36, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Let me clairfiy....I was going to make Blackfur's page and Charart. I already had the description made saved on Word Docx. And then Cinder made the page changing my description and then you Ocean made the Charart.

Dapple heart ♥ 01:38, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Woah... I did make the description A black tom with brown patches fur when the page was first created, but I allowed Dappleheart to finnish the page so she was allowed to change it.

C i n d e r s t o r m

Whats done is done. Both were good.... :D _{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 01:01, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oakleaf~ Tweaked[]

O c e a n f e a t h e r

Oakleaf has a white splotch on his chest. Add that and re-post it and I'll aprove :D :D _{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 21:16, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Approved :D _{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 21:33, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Not approved. Where are his black paws?

Dapple heart ♥ 21:51, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I forgot he had black paws. Ocean may u please add to that? or talk it over with Dapple..._{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 22:08, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thornfoot ~ Tweaked[]

Dappleheart♥ Do you wanna shade it or no? Approved._{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 02:36, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Woah Woah wait! You need to blur and smudge th paws. Then shade and highlight it. Iceyfern ^{Is back!!} 04:18, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Stoneclaw ~ Tweaked[]

Dappleheart♥ :D Approved_{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 05:31, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Moonstar ~ Tweaked[]

Dappleheart♥ Approveeeeed :D <3_{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 05:46, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Dapplestar ~ Tweaked[]

Dappleheart♥ 06:05, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Highlight and shade please Iceyfern ^{Is back!!} 04:19, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Done Rocktail[]

How do you likee? C i n d e r s t o r m Approved. :D_{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 01:53, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Done ~ Ravenbreeze[]

Sorry the chest might be messed up but it's because of my computer. Comments? ✩ Icey ✩ ^{-Ice Loves You-} Love it! Approved_{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 20:53, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Done ~ Roxyheart[]

She might look different from the picture on the page Roxyheart that's becasue this is a real tabby and I followed the description. Iceyfern ^{Is back!!}

Approved... I like it_{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 01:41, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

This is way better than Creampelt's! C i n d e r s t o r m 18:23, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Doing My Bad Charats[]

I'm bored so I'm tweaking my crappy chararts, and after that I'll work on Story Board.

Re-Done Mossypaw Approved :D _{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 00:07, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Done Bearclaw Approved :D _{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 00:07, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Done Kinkpaw

Approved :D _{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 00:07, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Done Cindermist

C i n d e r s t o r m Awww cute! Approved! Approved :D _{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 00:07, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Done ~ Lionflower[]

Comments Iceyfern ^{Is back!!} Omg I olove the shading!!! Approved._{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 00:21, November 22, 2011 (UTC))

Tweaked ~ Whitepaw[]

C i n d e r s t o r m Couldnt have done it better! Approved :D_{Storm is Coming}Moonstrike^{The moon is shining} 04:23, November 23, 2011 (UTC)